[Larky]

I felt like my first video had too much annoying crap in the begining and i had arm and balance issues. This video kinda redeems that.
Im kinda phasing the timing in this video because when i uploaded it on youtube, the music was offset just a tad

YouTube - Hardstyle Shuffle

thank you all so much for your comments on my last one
Larky

ps Cosmic Gate "Exploration of Space"
saw those bitches at Noc.... but i wasnt feeling good yet.... made me sad

[LittleBrie]

your good again!! haha. try to relax a bit and not look so stiff just your arms mainly i dunno haha looks awesome though

[piplool]

I thought it still looked good! You have a lot of flow in your leg movements, but your arms look a little tense. I am loving the videos though!!

[NaturalStix]

haha i loved this vid and i always love your little captions.

the only thing i can think of is add some spins to your running man or what not idk, i dont shuffle but i like when people spin around doin the running man thing idk... -.-

[poloik007]

getting better
i love you new style =D

[xocherryberrypie]

lolol. I love your subtitles/captions. Keep those fo' sho'!

Critique: More arm movement (I have some trouble with that too :P) and don't worry about ideas, just let the music take you and shuffle like there's no tomorrow!

Because it's not about what the crowd thinks, it's how you feel while you're doing what you love to do. :3

I also liked the suggestion to spin around a little more. Add some flava'! Just like doing it in reverse! That shit was tits!! (or 'awesome!!', whichever you prefer. :'3)

And where you film is totally cool! What time do you film at that nobody's around the place but you can still get in? :O

[Larky]

Originally Posted by xocherryberrypie

And where you film is totally cool! What time do you film at that nobody's around the place but you can still get in? :O

that is the 3rd floor of a parking structure at my college. I'm taking Calc 1B and they only offer that higher level math course as a night class so they leave the structure open! I wait about 10 mins and everyone leaves.
Riverside Community College
Go TIGERS!

THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR THE TIPS!!!
I'm currently working on spins, slides, glides, jumps and of course arm movements.
I hope to impress you all!

[LilRaverBoi]

That was some awesome stuff!!! Very fluid. You've got some great moves! I really liked that reverse running man...I've never seen that before and thought it was a really sick variation! Keep up the good work. If I were to critique, I'd say do a little more with your arms. I know it's a lot to concentrate on because that style of dance has such complex foot-work, but I think you have it in ya!

[Marshall]

awesome vid and great moves. keep up the work, Larky!

i'm learning shuffle atm too, but you have me beat. there are some tuts on youtube specifically aimed at arms movements that could help out alot. Once you actually get your arms into the dance, it gives you much more move variation without having to really learn new foot movements, ya know? throw in a jump and a spin and ur a pro, brotha!

ps. loved the song in this one much better than the first vid. cosmic IS the shit. I thought I was gonna get sick at Noct when they came on because it got so hot in that room. balls-out stringing didn't help =(

[glowsticking stevo]

loosen up he arms a little and you will be perfect