[DjHellzy]

ok guys try this link and tell me if it works lol im new to this lol

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=OFGSZIZW

if it dosnt work then ill try something else lol, however if it does work! then this track is one of my few songs ever completed so its not that great . or maybe im just to hard on myself so u decide! if you saw my first thread i said i make techno (more trance stuff) but im trying to break away from thos roots and try other things.. ok im just rambling here lmao

this track is more trance based. any thoughts on what i could do diff. or anything thats good is welcome! im open to anything u guys tell me long as its constructive

[jareblue]

on the dl now.. will give it a listen and get back 2 u.. =)

[bird^]

downloading as well, cant wait to give it a listen

[jareblue]

well, i think ur organs can be a little stronger.. and there is a single note that starts :55 and goes 4 about 30 secs.. kinda too much.. i'd back off a bit.. i really like how it crescendoes off (1:27??) tho, that's nice.. and the bass is pretty punchy.. felt it should boom a little more..

that's really nit-picky fine tuning kinda stuff.. i thought that was a pretty solid track brother.. yea could use a little tweaking, but i'd string 2 it..

[Daisy]

Other than the note Jare mentioned it sounds pretty good.

[Tredamit]

I dig it I would throw in some pads or light strings during the 1:30 mark break down to add a fuller sound to the break. Besides that its a weener. I hate megaupload though check out www.djdemo.net it should give you enough space to upload your tracks and you can stream or download without the wait ...Tre

[DjHellzy]

thanks for the advice guys! ill keep it in mind!!!

and jare i listined to it and found the note your talking about sry bout that lol.

i love all the advice u guys are giving me!!! and ill try out the djdemo site for the next song i upload!

tell everyone to come listin!!!! lmao i need all the help i can get

[jareblue]

if u post it i will listen!!

[DjHellzy]

AWESOME! we will have to see what will happen cuz idk when ima put another up or if i even am lol but most likely i will

[DJ_Eezergud]

Man that was really good. besides the above mention's and a little mixing and leveling work i really really like this tune i gotta say tho i think it really starts to shine at about 2:27
very nice work