Awesome....great vid! Much better with more light....I feel I can give you a better/more honest critique now that I can see what you're doing. It seemed like you had a good variety of moves, a nice flow and your planes were good. My suggestions: wraps could be a bit smoother, but this will likely come with time/practice....not to worry! I would like to see some reverse weaves in there....that will really open doors for other moves (ie: fountains) and turning moves (180/360 weaves). Also, you do a nice little wall-plane weave-type thing a lot with your upper wrist beside your arm.....you've got the motion down already, now just see if you can get the wrist UNDER that arm....I made a
tutorial for this which might help. All in all, great job! Keep up the good work!
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