Thats definatly a very good first video

A couple tips when creating vids: Try to spin the glowsticks at a 90 degree angle to the camera- this way the audience can catch the whole source of light from the glowstick, rather than if it were standing at an angle(like you were at the beginning) you only see a portion of the glowstick. Also it makes it hard to tell what you are doing :P
The next thing I would start learning are windmills and the reverse weave. Those will help you transition to different parts of your body a lot easier, also enabling you to perform fountains
