[Sylus]

Well i will start off by saying that I like seeing another producer posting tunes up on here now

now on to my feedback


Kick - The kick sounds to bassy for the track and needs to be layered with a more puncher kick as well.

Bass - You can't tell if there is a bass in there so a volume adjustment might be in order. As for the Bassline that you do have running, It doesn't seem to be in key with the lead in some sections.

Clap - This could use a reverb, Flanger, or phaser to help it sound more with the track rather than seperate

Open Hihat - i dont hear any

Close Hihat/Ride - dont hear this neither

Crash - could have the same things that the clap has

lead - It seems to be all over the place with notes. Also, Layer 2 leads to make it sound fuller or what i like to call... Epic!

These are just my opinions and thoughts. use them for improvement.

Also, i use FL8 so if you have any quesitons or concerns feel free to hit me up i am more than happy to help, just ask anyone

[dark_raver66]

hey nice mix man like it a lot have u made a link to download it yet

[sky goodman]

skitch thanks for the judgment and i will go back and make improvements see if makes better thx


dark raven download will be avalible sometime in futer if i get it redone

[Sylus]

well if you ever need any help goodman just ask