[Rylan]

http://rapidshare.com/files/12857459...le111.mp3.html

umm i just literally got into producing like a few days ago
using Fl studio 8 great software let me know
what you think of it so far lots of work still needs to be done!!

[Sylus]

what BPM are you producing this tune at? it doesn't sound as though it is hardstyle speed. dont hear much of a bass. and the sounds could use some effects. Also, a really good hardstyle lead would sound sorta high pitch grainy. if you get what i mean. the lead you are using sounds like it would sound good in a trance song.

well those are thoughts. hope that helps somewhat

[Rylan]

lol yeah i understand what your saying.
honestly its was my first try at producing anything
so i wasnt expecting anything that great out of it